In dilemma
she walks
In expectation
he waits
In expectation
He is early
In dilemma
She is late
She Walks, he waits
In dilemma
she walks
In expectation
he waits
In expectation
He is early
In dilemma
She is late
I am a dreamer I weave tales in my mind I am connected to you through these words And through this screen across the virtual world View more posts
My Tales Within
Wow! So much said in so few words! I loved your poem!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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So glad you liked the thought
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Ha, Ha! This was such a good take on the painting. It’s humorous, but also very deep when speaking of the relationships between men and women.
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Hey thanks. 😊
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You’re welcome.
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A perfect refection of relationships 🙌
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Hey thanks 😊😊
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Crisp and clear, a lot of oomph per word. Very nicely done.
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Thanks 😊😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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This is a stunning example of concise use of words to say so much! What form is this? (she asked stupidly)
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Thanks 😊
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The form that resonates (he replies likewise) 😁
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😹
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So good I really liked it.
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Thanks a lot 😊
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Excellent! Is this a particular poetic form? I’ve never seen it before!
Much love,
David
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David, I can’t define the form, cause there ain’t any.
But I must thank you to introduce me to Haiku and Elfchen
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🤗
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