Falling

Echoes of the soulSeptember 11, 2022Poemclarity, falling, philosophy, Poem, self discovery, truth, understanding

Falling
I am falling
Faster and heavier
Pulled inwards
Yet surging out
The tear is wider
Ripping open the truth
Layer by layer
the sheaths are parted
the endless fall ends
Static at the bottom
There in the abyss
There appears a light
Clear as crystal
The vision is clear
In a mind placid
There are no sheaths
There is just me
And there lies the truth

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5 thoughts on “Falling”

Sadje says:

September 11, 2022 at 12:45 pm

Beautiful and profound poem!

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1. Echoes of the soul says:
  
  September 11, 2022 at 5:05 pm
  
  Thanks 😊🙏
  
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  1. Sadje says:
    
    September 11, 2022 at 5:09 pm
    
    You’re welcome
    
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Secret Bree says:

September 13, 2022 at 5:00 pm

Far out that those two finishing lines are a brilliant ending. Bravo.

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1. Echoes of the soul says:
  
  September 13, 2022 at 10:06 pm
  
  Thanks for appreciating 😊🙏
  
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