The lifeless eyes stare
The wooden wings spread in vain
Rooted in sunlight
Spread on wall in surrender
Real eyes stay in shadows
#tankatuesday
Lifeless eyes
The lifeless eyes stare
The wooden wings spread in vain
Rooted in sunlight
Spread on wall in surrender
Real eyes stay in shadows
#tankatuesday
I am a dreamer I weave tales in my mind I am connected to you through these words And through this screen across the virtual world View more posts
My Tales Within
I love this ❤️
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Thanks
Glad you liked 😊
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I think your tanka depicts the shadow self very well. That’s the part we all try to hide from everyone. Well done!
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Brilliant you truly saw truth.💜
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Hey thanks. 😊
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The way you describe it reminds me of someone enchanted and trapped. I hope someone sees them in there and releases them from it.
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Everyone has a part trapped 😊
Thanks for seeing
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Clever and thought provoking.
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It is as it is perceived. Thanks for perceiving 😊
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