She is safe #tankatuesdays

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She is bound and safe
Warm cloak of expectation
She is a bit cold

#haiku

#tankatuesday

Published by Echoes of the soul

I am a dreamer I weave tales in my mind I am connected to you through these words through this screen across the virtual world I and my tales within

19 thoughts on “She is safe #tankatuesdays”

  1. I like this as a senryu because the woman is the star in your words… also, the tone. The last line comes across as a bit of snark: “she is a bit cold.” Could this be literally? Or is she a cold-hearted woman? There’s a great mystery in this poem. I like it!

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      1. This is what I love about syllabic poetry… we can all receive different meanings from the poetry. That appeals to me. That cold you describe, is a wonderfully human feeling and can lead us on many different paths. Excellent.

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    1. That’s an interesting take. My take on the ‘Cold’ was more on her feeling. Despite the cloak of expectation which seemingly protects but yet binds her, she feels cold and distant 😊
      Thanks. Glad you liked

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