
The Sky turns crimson
Mirroring hues of my mind
The eyes are red too
Dark clouds are laden with tears
Raindrops will pour out tonight
Thanks to Colleen’s weekly TankaTuesday challenge
I feel the sky takes the colour of your mind. The weather is just an expression of your inner climate
What do you think?
Wow… putting aside the lovely poem, did you take that gorgeous photo?
Sincerely,
David [ben Alexander]
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What an excellent observation, “I feel the sky takes the colour of your mind. The weather is just an expression of your inner climate.” This is a wonderful tanka poem. So much emotion! Well done. ❤
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Hey thanks Colleen for the cue. And yes, today morning the sky is fresh blue 😊
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That blue sky sounds lovely. Have a wonderful weekend. ❤
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Wow! Your thoughts complement the beautiful picture.
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Thanks.
Yes possibly the picture got coloured with my thought. Or vice versa 😊
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You’re right.
And this is so lovely. XoXo
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Thanks Selma. Glad you liked 😊
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The mind echoes the nature around and shapes your thoughts.
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Yes Achan. All is the play of the mind
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Great connection between your emotions and the weather! I loved it! 🙂
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Thanks a lot. Glad you could connect with the thoughts 😊
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Perfect use of the prompt.
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Thanks. The prompt did it’s job well. It prompted the expression. Glad you liked 😀
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